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Daily Deviation

January 5, 2010
`ndifference's narrator claims to be Waiting On Trains, but leads me to wonder if the characters aren't killing time before a larger conclusion. Sonically pleasing, this is one to read aloud, slowly.
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A train siding is about a mile to the north of my house. Everything I do in this town takes place north of the tracks, so I spend a lot of time sitting in my car at the crossing waiting for the goddamned train to pass.

In the center console of my vehicle is a small notebook. I made it a habit to write a line every time I was stopped by the train. This piece is the result of about six months of that.

The great train photo in the tag was taken by :icongxmew:

You can view the original here: [link]
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sydnerella's avatar
I really love this, you are a very talented writer.

The first line is such an amazing metaphor, too.